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Whitchurch Combined School

Growing Today, Ready for Tomorrow

Whitchurch Combined School

Growing Today, Ready for Tomorrow


Task 1

Watch the video lesson where I model write the next part of the diary.

Task 2


Write the next diary entry in your exercise book. Use the heading Base Camp.

Remember all the writing rules we use in class (see previous lesson.)

Task 3

Read through your work, identify where you have met the success criteria and underline examples in your work. Complete column two in the success criteria grid from yesterday. Remember that if you find that you have made a mistake (eg written he/she not I) then you should go through in a different colour and change your writing so that it meets the success criteria.


Please make sure that you only write the part of the diary that I have modelled. If you try and move on through the diary too fast, then you will not spend enough time to write each section with enough quality.


Finally, please take a photo of your writing so far and send it to me on class dojo. This will help me to plan for next week as well as showing me what an amazing job you are doing!

Whitchurch Combined School Values

Be Kind
  • No matter how tough your day has been for you: always be kind - Emily, Year 5.
Be Respectful
  • Accept people's ideas or games you might play on the play ground - Edward H, Year 5.
Be Proud
  • Being proud to me is doing your best work and looking for ways to improve - Freddie, Year 5.
Be Resilient
  • You don’t give up! You keep trying your best until it gets easier! - Henny, Year 5.
Be Curious
  • Being Curious to me is asking questions, being interested and wanting to try new things - Edward W, Year 5